"Freshman Survival 102: A very bad Spring Break" doesn't have a bad Lead!
Freshman Lisa Magedler submitted an article to the Opinion section of the Hurricane titled "Freshman Survival 102: A very bad Spring Break." Her lead is written as follows:
"Every year, college kids across the nation flock to exotic places like Cancun, Europe and Booze Cruises around the Caribbean. These exotic trips don't usually pay for themselves, and if you don't have your parents to fork over the Almighty Dollar, your plans for Spring Break might become limited."
This is an salient feature lead because it's focusing on one aspect of spring break in particular: money. I thought this was an efficient way to not only hook the reader's attention but also introduce what she discusses in the rest of the article. For an article such as this one, the lead Magedler chose is extremely effective. Other leads that could have worked well for a story like this include anecdotal, scene-setter, and contrast. Actually, a contrast lead could be even more interesting than the one she uses. She implies a contrast between expensive spring break trips and trips for those without the "Almighty Dollar," but she could have played up this contrast more to make an interesting contrast lead.
